Date: 2022-09-18 02:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] acorn_squash
Wow, this was great! A little more horror than I like, but still a really good read. I'd say that the non-horror parts are usually a PG-13 rating and sometimes R, while the horror parts are sometimes PG-13 but mostly R. I liked autonomancy and I'll definitely be checking out your other links. The reveal at the end was genuinely eerie but quite satisfying in a "don't trust your abuser" way. I really liked the messages the characters left each other - very domestic and silly. I feel like I got to know some of the characters really well and I liked them a lot.

My only complaint is that some of the chapters are marked 18+ using Reddit's system, which in practice means you can't read them unless you have the app. Since the narrators are from a DID system, though, I actually found that having some of the chapters literally inaccessible helped with immersion; your mileage may vary. The story did make sense without the 18+ chapters, though, to the point where I have no idea what could have happened in them (very graphic flashback scenes?).
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